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๐™ผ๐šŠ๐šข๐šŠ ๐šŽ๐š—๐š๐šŽ๐š›๐šŽ๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š•๐š’๐š‹๐š›๐šŠ๐š›๐šข ๐šŠ๐š๐š๐šŽ๐š› ๐š›๐šŽ๐šŒ๐šŽ๐š’๐šŸ๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š–๐šข๐šœ๐š๐šŽ๐š›๐š’๐š˜๐šž๐šœ ๐š–๐šŽ๐šœ๐šœ๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ. ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ ๐š ๐šŠ๐šœ ๐šŠ๐š•๐š›๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š๐šข ๐š ๐šŠ๐š’๐š๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐š›๐šŽ.

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Okay so the way it unravels once Arjun finds the clue is so good. The whole time you're not sure what's going to happen but when it clicks you see exactly how it had to go.

Okay so the way it unravels once Arjun finds the clue is so good. The whole time you're not sure what's going to happen but when it clicks you see exactly how it had to go.

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๐™ผ๐šŠ๐šข๐šŠ ๐šŽ๐š—๐š๐šŽ๐š›๐šŽ๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š•๐š’๐š‹๐š›๐šŠ๐š›๐šข ๐šŠ๐š๐š๐šŽ๐š› ๐š›๐šŽ๐šŒ๐šŽ๐š’๐šŸ๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š–๐šข๐šœ๐š๐šŽ๐š›๐š’๐š˜๐šž๐šœ ๐š–๐šŽ๐šœ๐šœ๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ. ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ ๐š ๐šŠ๐šœ ๐šŠ๐š•๐š›๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š๐šข ๐š ๐šŠ๐š’๐š๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐š›๐šŽ.

โ€œ๐šˆ๐š˜๐šž ๐šŠ๐š•๐š ๐šŠ๐šข๐šœ ๐š๐šŽ๐š ๐šŽ๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šข๐š๐š‘๐š’๐š—๐š,โ€ ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ ๐šœ๐šŠ๐š’๐š ๐šŠ๐š—๐š๐š›๐š’๐š•๐šข.

๐™ผ๐šŠ๐šข๐šŠ ๐šœ๐š๐šŠ๐š›๐šŽ๐š ๐šŠ๐š ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š›. โ€œ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ, ๐š ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐šŠ๐š›๐šŽ ๐šข๐š˜๐šž ๐š๐šŠ๐š•๐š”๐š’๐š—๐š ๐šŠ๐š‹๐š˜๐šž๐š?โ€

โ€œ๐šƒ๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šŠ๐š ๐šŠ๐š›๐š. ๐šƒ๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š™๐š›๐šŠ๐š’๐šœ๐šŽ. ๐™ด๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šข๐š˜๐š—๐šŽ'๐šœ ๐šŠ๐š๐š๐šŽ๐š—๐š๐š’๐š˜๐š—. ๐™ด๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š— ๐š–๐šข ๐š๐š›๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š–๐šœ ๐šœ๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š– ๐š๐š˜ ๐š‹๐šŽ๐š•๐š˜๐š—๐š ๐š๐š˜ ๐šข๐š˜๐šž ๐š—๐š˜๐š !โ€

๐šƒ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š’๐š› ๐šŠ๐š›๐š๐šž๐š–๐šŽ๐š—๐š ๐š๐š›๐šŽ๐š  ๐š•๐š˜๐šž๐š๐šŽ๐š›. ๐™ผ๐šŠ๐šข๐šŠ ๐š๐š›๐š’๐šŽ๐š ๐š๐š˜ ๐š•๐šŽ๐šŠ๐šŸ๐šŽ, ๐š‹๐šž๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ ๐šœ๐š๐š˜๐š™๐š™๐šŽ๐š ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š›. ๐™ธ๐š— ๐šŠ ๐šœ๐šž๐š๐š๐šŽ๐š— ๐š–๐š˜๐š–๐šŽ๐š—๐š ๐š˜๐š ๐šŠ๐š—๐š๐šŽ๐š›, ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ ๐šŠ๐š๐š๐šŠ๐šŒ๐š”๐šŽ๐š ๐™ผ๐šŠ๐šข๐šŠ.

๐™ผ๐šŠ๐šข๐šŠ ๐š๐šŽ๐š•๐š• ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐šœ๐š๐š˜๐š™๐š™๐šŽ๐š ๐š›๐šŽ๐šœ๐š™๐š˜๐š—๐š๐š’๐š—๐š.

๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ ๐š๐š›๐š˜๐šฃ๐šŽ.

๐™ต๐š˜๐š› ๐šœ๐šŽ๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šŠ๐š• ๐šœ๐šŽ๐šŒ๐š˜๐š—๐š๐šœ, ๐šœ๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šœ๐š’๐š–๐š™๐š•๐šข ๐šœ๐š๐š˜๐š˜๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐š›๐šŽ, ๐š›๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š•๐š’๐šฃ๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š™๐š™๐šŽ๐š—๐šŽ๐š. ๐™ท๐šŽ๐š› ๐š“๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š•๐š˜๐šž๐šœ๐šข ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š๐šž๐š›๐š—๐šŽ๐š ๐š’๐š—๐š๐š˜ ๐šœ๐š˜๐š–๐šŽ๐š๐š‘๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š’๐š›๐š›๐šŽ๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šœ๐š’๐š‹๐š•๐šŽ.

๐™ธ๐š—๐šœ๐š๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š ๐š˜๐š ๐šŒ๐šŠ๐š•๐š•๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š˜๐š› ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š•๐š™ ๐š’๐š–๐š–๐šŽ๐š๐š’๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ๐š•๐šข, ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ ๐š๐š›๐š’๐šŽ๐š ๐š๐š˜ ๐š–๐šŠ๐š”๐šŽ ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šœ๐šŒ๐šŽ๐š—๐šŽ ๐š•๐š˜๐š˜๐š” ๐š•๐š’๐š”๐šŽ ๐šœ๐š˜๐š–๐šŽ๐š˜๐š—๐šŽ ๐šŽ๐š•๐šœ๐šŽ ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐šŠ๐š๐š๐šŠ๐šŒ๐š”๐šŽ๐š ๐™ผ๐šŠ๐šข๐šŠ. ๐š‚๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š•๐šŽ๐š๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š•๐š’๐š‹๐š›๐šŠ๐š›๐šข ๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐š›๐šŽ๐š๐šž๐š›๐š—๐šŽ๐š ๐š๐š˜๐š ๐š—๐šœ๐š๐šŠ๐š’๐š›๐šœ, ๐š™๐š›๐šŽ๐š๐šŽ๐š—๐š๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š—๐š˜๐š๐š‘๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š™๐š™๐šŽ๐š—๐šŽ๐š.

๐™ฑ๐šž๐š ๐šœ๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š–๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ ๐š˜๐š—๐šŽ ๐š–๐š’๐šœ๐š๐šŠ๐š”๐šŽ.

๐š‚๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š๐š˜๐š›๐š๐š˜๐š๐š๐šŽ๐š— ๐š๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š•๐š’๐š‹๐š›๐šŠ๐š›๐šข ๐š๐š˜๐š˜๐š› ๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š‹๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š— ๐šœ๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š— ๐šŒ๐š•๐š˜๐šœ๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š‹๐šŽ๐š‘๐š’๐š—๐š ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š›.

๐š†๐š‘๐šŽ๐š— ๐™ณ๐šŽ๐š๐šŽ๐šŒ๐š๐š’๐šŸ๐šŽ ๐™ฐ๐š›๐š“๐šž๐š— ๐š๐š’๐šœ๐šŒ๐š˜๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šŽ๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šŒ๐š•๐šž๐šŽ, ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ ๐šœ๐š๐š˜๐š›๐šข ๐š‹๐šŽ๐š๐šŠ๐š— ๐š๐š˜ ๐šž๐š—๐š›๐šŠ๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š•.

โ€œ๐™น๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š•๐š˜๐šž๐šœ๐šข ๐š๐š’๐š๐š—'๐š ๐š“๐šž๐šœ๐š ๐š๐š’๐šŸ๐šŽ ๐šข๐š˜๐šž ๐šŠ ๐š›๐šŽ๐šŠ๐šœ๐š˜๐š—,โ€ ๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š๐š˜๐š•๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ. โ€œ๐™ธ๐š ๐š๐šŠ๐šŸ๐šŽ ๐šข๐š˜๐šž ๐šŠ ๐š–๐š˜๐š–๐šŽ๐š—๐š ๐š˜๐š ๐šŠ๐š—๐š๐šŽ๐š›โ€”๐šŠ๐š—๐š ๐šข๐š˜๐šž ๐šŒ๐š‘๐š˜๐šœ๐šŽ ๐š๐š˜ ๐š•๐šŽ๐š ๐š๐š‘๐šŠ๐š ๐š–๐š˜๐š–๐šŽ๐š—๐š ๐š๐šŽ๐šœ๐š๐š›๐š˜๐šข ๐šŽ๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š›๐šข๐š๐š‘๐š’๐š—๐š.โ€

๐š๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ ๐š•๐š˜๐š ๐šŽ๐š›๐šŽ๐š ๐š‘๐šŽ๐š› ๐š‘๐šŽ๐šŠ๐š.

๐šƒ๐š‘๐šŽ ๐š–๐šข๐šœ๐š๐šŽ๐š›๐šข ๐š ๐šŠ๐šœ ๐šœ๐š˜๐š•๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š, ๐š‹๐šž๐š ๐™ผ๐šŠ๐šข๐šŠ'๐šœ ๐š•๐š’๐š๐šŽ ๐šŒ๐š˜๐šž๐š•๐š ๐š—๐šŽ๐šŸ๐šŽ๐š› ๐š‹๐šŽ ๐š›๐šŽ๐šœ๐š๐š˜๐š›๐šŽ๐š.

โ€œ๐™…๐™š๐™–๐™ก๐™ค๐™ช๐™จ๐™ฎ ๐™ž๐™จ ๐™– ๐™™๐™–๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™š๐™ง๐™ค๐™ช๐™จ ๐™จ๐™๐™–๐™™๐™ค๐™ฌ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™œ๐™ง๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™จ ๐™ฆ๐™ช๐™ž๐™š๐™ฉ๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™ž๐™ฃ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™๐™š๐™–๐™ง๐™ฉ. ๐˜ผ๐™ฉ ๐™›๐™ž๐™ง๐™จ๐™ฉ, ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™ข๐™–๐™ฎ ๐™จ๐™š๐™š๐™ข ๐™ก๐™ž๐™ ๐™š ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฉ๐™๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™ข๐™ค๐™ง๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™›๐™š๐™–๐™ง ๐™ค๐™› ๐™ก๐™ค๐™จ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™จ๐™ค๐™ข๐™š๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™š, ๐™—๐™ช๐™ฉ ๐™ฌ๐™๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™š๐™ง, ๐™จ๐™ช๐™จ๐™ฅ๐™ž๐™˜๐™ž๐™ค๐™ฃ, ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™ค๐™—๐™จ๐™š๐™จ๐™จ๐™ž๐™ค๐™ฃ ๐™–๐™ง๐™š ๐™–๐™ก๐™ก๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™š๐™™ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™œ๐™ง๐™ค๐™ฌ, ๐™ฉ๐™๐™–๐™ฉ ๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™ฎ ๐™›๐™š๐™š๐™ก๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™˜๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™—๐™š๐™˜๐™ค๐™ข๐™š ๐™ฅ๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™š๐™ง๐™›๐™ช๐™ก ๐™š๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ช๐™œ๐™ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™™๐™š๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™ค๐™ฎ ๐™›๐™ง๐™ž๐™š๐™ฃ๐™™๐™จ๐™๐™ž๐™ฅ๐™จ, ๐™›๐™–๐™ข๐™ž๐™ก๐™ž๐™š๐™จ, ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™ช๐™จ๐™ฉ, ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™ก๐™ž๐™ซ๐™š๐™จ. ๐™„๐™ฃ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™š๐™ฃ๐™™, ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™ช๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™˜๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ฃ๐™ค๐™ฉ ๐™—๐™š ๐™๐™ž๐™™๐™™๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง. ๐™€๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง๐™ฎ ๐™จ๐™š๐™˜๐™ง๐™š๐™ฉ ๐™ก๐™š๐™–๐™ซ๐™š๐™จ ๐™– ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™–๐™˜๐™š, ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง๐™ฎ ๐™˜๐™๐™ค๐™ž๐™˜๐™š ๐™๐™–๐™จ ๐™– ๐™˜๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™จ๐™š๐™ฆ๐™ช๐™š๐™ฃ๐™˜๐™š, ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™จ๐™ค๐™ข๐™š๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ข๐™š๐™จ ๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™š ๐™ข๐™ค๐™ข๐™š๐™ฃ๐™ฉ ๐™ค๐™› ๐™ช๐™ฃ๐™˜๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™ค๐™ก๐™ก๐™š๐™™ ๐™Ÿ๐™š๐™–๐™ก๐™ค๐™ช๐™จ๐™ฎ ๐™˜๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™˜๐™๐™–๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ก๐™ž๐™ซ๐™š๐™จ ๐™ค๐™› ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง๐™ฎ๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™š ๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™ซ๐™ค๐™ก๐™ซ๐™š๐™™ ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง.โ€

Thoughts

  • MelanieOdum

    Twenty years hearing this same moment, different names. Not the violence, the aftermath. The person standing there knowing what they chose to do. That's what stays.

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  • theointhebackrow

    Okay so the way it unravels once Arjun finds the clue is so good. The whole time you're not sure what's going to happen but when it clicks you see exactly how it had to go.

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  • samReads2

    I can't stop thinking about the second where she decides to pretend nothing happened. Like she could just walk away and erase the whole thing, but the door already saw.

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    The image that stays is her frozen in that moment. Knowing. That's all.

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  • Ovid

    Thanks. Dark work.

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  • gwen64

    The library door closing behind her. That one detail changes everything.

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  • benfromnights

    That freeze is the real moment. Not the anger, not the attack, the second after when she knows exactly what she's done and it can never be undone. Everything breaks there.

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  • The_Teensy_Novelist

    ๐™๐™–๐™ ๐™š ๐™˜๐™–๐™ง๐™š ๐™—๐™ฎ๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐™š๐ŸŒธ

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