Your note that this is pure poetry and not your life is kind, it lets people read it without worrying about you. I bet the question about being let all the way in is one a lot of readers have asked someone and never got an answer to either. It reads like the start of something longer to me, the speaker isn't done waiting yet :)
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Your note that this is pure poetry and not your life is kind, it lets people read it without worrying about you. I bet the question about being let all the way in is one a lot of readers have asked someone and never got an answer to either. It reads like
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There’s some bliss in it, too.
There is silence between us now.
There never used to be.
And all I asked you was, “Why won’t you ever let me all the way in?”
Yet, you didn’t reply. Maybe you did, in a way, with silence, with nothing but ignorance.
Despite it all, I’ll still hold on. Hold on until you yank me away. Until you tell me it’s done, that it’s never going to lead to a “forever”.
It’s all speculation, I know. But I know you’re not that cruel. Cruel in certain ways, yes.
But why would you choose to stay now?
Perhaps the answer to this is what could finally make sense of your sudden silences, the ones that come and go, leaving me here, wondering.
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Your note that this is pure poetry and not your life is kind, it lets people read it without worrying about you. I bet the question about being let all the way in is one a lot of readers have asked someone and never got an answer to either. It reads like the start of something longer to me, the speaker isn't done waiting yet :)
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Hello dear readers , a quick note , this is purely a poetic piece unrelated to my real life , though you still may ask out your queries in the comments , thanks for your feedback and time.
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There’s some bliss in it, too.