the bit that stayed with me is her telling you about her adventures, and you wanting to hear what she had been getting up to.
and that is where you left it, after everything above it: her warmth one more time, her laugh, her sitting beside you. that is yours, i am only reading it back to you.
i read the whole of it, the middle too, and none of it put me off you. was she the one who read your poems first?