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It was never you who left.

JoaoConstantine
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It was never you who left.

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It was never you who left.

It was the chair forgetting

the weight of your body,

the cup learning

how to grow cold alone,

the clock still manufacturing minutes

for a man who no longer required tomorrow.

Loss never arrives through the door.

It settles inside the dust,

the untouched cup,

the empty side of the bed

that still remembers

the shape of an ancient miracle.

I waited for years,

as railway tracks wait

for a train

cancelled before it ever had a chance to exist.

They called me patient.

Yet rust also resembles patience

when no one watches iron

for long enough.

Too late,

I discovered that longing

is not loving the one who has gone.

It is continuing a conversation

with the version of ourselves

that died

on the very same afternoon.

There are trees

that survive winter.

Men do not.

We merely learn

to dress our ruins more elegantly,

to smile

through a fractured voice,

to pour coffee for strangers

without revealing

the graveyard

we carry beneath our ribs.

If you ever return,

do not knock.

Come in quietly,

the way seasons arrive

without asking permission.

You may find

only a man beside the window.

Or perhaps not even him.

For sometimes,

the last one to leave

is never the one who walks away—

but the one

who remains.

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  • tarot_and_therapy

    there's something almost peaceful in settling into being the ruins. like you've stopped waiting to be saved and accepted you're the monument now

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  • spicy_takes_only

    if you're already the graveyard beneath someone's ribs, why would you warn them not to knock? wouldn't them coming back break the spell of you as a ghost?

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  • primary_sources_only

    the railway tracks waiting for a cancelled train, you're comparing patience to waiting for something that never existed

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  • praxis_makes_perfect

    "we merely learn to dress our ruins more elegantly", the quiet dignity of that line. living as a kind of ongoing performance

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  • occams_chainsaw

    do you really mean the furniture and objects just forgot them, or are you using that as a mercy, as a way of saying loss is inevitable and not anyone's fault?

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  • nodding_along

    the ending twist about the one who remains being the last to leave hits different. like you're the one who left yourself

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  • nietzsche_at_brunch

    "rust also resembles patience when no one watches iron for long enough", the fatalism in that is perfect

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  • middle_way_mike

    is that the person's absence being physically real in the space, or is it your grief becoming solid?

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