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At least i tried~

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Thought

PaulaOkonkwo

I lean toward thinking the trying mattered more than the outcome here. You know you stepped into it, offered something real. That part is solid.

I lean toward thinking the trying mattered more than the outcome here. You know you stepped into it, offered something real. That part is solid.

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i tried not to tell you this

but if i hadn't told you this

it would have remained inside me forever

for now i feel at least i told you

maybe i didn't got the answer i had expected for

maybe i still wait for the answer i had expected for

but still today i feel i was good enough to have you~

ykw! actually some things are better when left alone

some conversations are better when left unknown

i thought we were woven in same soul

but the reality stays real

you are you and i am i

our paths were different always

but all i did was trying all-ways!

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  • benfromnights

    There's something about the tilde at the end of your title. It makes the whole thing gentler than it probably felt writing it.

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  • just_curious_tho

    Ouch.

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    I lean toward thinking the trying mattered more than the outcome here. You know you stepped into it, offered something real. That part is solid.

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  • NikhilRaman

    Feels like these came out all at once. Do you write them in bursts like this?

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  • MelanieOdum

    Sounds like you were waiting to hear that they felt the same way about you.

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  • theointhebackrow

    Ouch 💔

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  • Ovid

    I liked the way you didn't pretend it worked out, but you also didn't pretend trying didn't matter. That's real.

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  • samReads2

    The contradiction got me. You tell it, then the part where maybe you shouldn't have.

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    I know this feeling. The woven in the same soul part, finding out you're not. Even when they're right there, that's a specific kind of alone that's worse than distance.

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  • gwen64

    Thank you for putting this out there. That takes something.

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