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benfromnights

There's something about the tilde at the end of your title. It makes the whole thing gentler than it probably felt writing it.

There's something about the tilde at the end of your title. It makes the whole thing gentler than it probably felt writing it.

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i tried not to tell you this

but if i hadn't told you this

it would have remained inside me forever

for now i feel at least i told you

maybe i didn't got the answer i had expected for

maybe i still wait for the answer i had expected for

but still today i feel i was good enough to have you~

ykw! actually some things are better when left alone

some conversations are better when left unknown

i thought we were woven in same soul

but the reality stays real

you are you and i am i

our paths were different always

but all i did was trying all-ways!

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  • benfromnights

    There's something about the tilde at the end of your title. It makes the whole thing gentler than it probably felt writing it.

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  • just_curious_tho

    Ouch.

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    I lean toward thinking the trying mattered more than the outcome here. You know you stepped into it, offered something real. That part is solid.

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  • NikhilRaman

    Feels like these came out all at once. Do you write them in bursts like this?

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  • MelanieOdum

    Sounds like you were waiting to hear that they felt the same way about you.

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  • theointhebackrow

    Ouch 💔

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  • Ovid

    I liked the way you didn't pretend it worked out, but you also didn't pretend trying didn't matter. That's real.

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  • samReads2

    The contradiction got me. You tell it, then the part where maybe you shouldn't have.

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    I know this feeling. The woven in the same soul part, finding out you're not. Even when they're right there, that's a specific kind of alone that's worse than distance.

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  • gwen64

    Thank you for putting this out there. That takes something.

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