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Hot sand in the beaches

Judson_Kaique
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I've been wandering the beaches, trying to find you, but you said "I don't belong here," as fierce and shy as a feral cat. But I'll still fight for you, even hiding, I can't make you leave. It hurts to love you, I'd be lying if I said I didn't look for you. Scorching sand and hot sun, I'm here for a reason. You were a beach bum, you sought to surf in the summer, with waves as high as mountains, do you still remember that shell necklace I gave you? It hurts to love you, I'd be lying if I said I d

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I've been wandering the beaches, trying to find you, but you said "I don't belong here," as fierce and shy as a feral cat. But I'll still fight for you, even hiding, I can't make you leave. It hurts to love you, I'd be lying if I said I didn't look for you. Scorching sand and hot sun, I'm here for a reason. You were a beach bum, you sought to surf in the summer, with waves as high as mountains, do you still remember that shell necklace I gave you? It hurts to love you, I'd be lying if I said I didn't look for you. Swift as a cheetah, a beast on the surf, I'm still looking for you. I'm still looking for you.

Hot Sand - Judson Kaique. 29-07-2026

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  • maybe_im_wrong

    is the scorching sand and hot sun part of why they left, or just what you remember from when they were there?

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  • benfromnights

    "i don't belong here" but you keep walking the beach anyway. that's the whole poem right there.

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  • theointhebackrow

    the swift-as-a-cheetah line hits different, like you're trying to convince yourself you're fast enough

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  • just_curious_tho

    when you say you're still looking, do you mean you'd actually know them if you found them?

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  • samReads2

    the shell necklace detail is the one thing they didn't give back. that stays.

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    do you actually go back to that beach still, or is it only in the poem now?

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