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Blind under the Dawn.

Judson_Kaique
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Blind Under the Dawn. Blind by the night lights. I am alone in this vast city, searching for my "self." I can hear distant beats, but the city is abandoned; there is no one to judge my tormented soul at this moment. I wander through the nights, avoiding the sun. The city is still cold and uninhabited; I lose myself in the dawn lights, feeling blind and empty. Always searching for my dark version. Here there are no judges, only sinners. I feel like a wild beast, where I can dance, drink, and hav

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Blind Under the Dawn

Blind by the night lights.

I am alone in this vast city, searching for my "self."

I can hear distant beats, but the city is abandoned;

there is no one to judge my tormented soul at this moment.

I wander through the nights, avoiding the sun.

The city is still cold and uninhabited;

I lose myself in the dawn lights, feeling blind and empty.

Always searching for my dark version.

Here there are no judges, only sinners.

I feel like a wild beast, where I can dance, drink, and have fun

without judgment from others.

Like a fierce panther, lurking in search of amusement.

Vodka remains in the bar, people have left,

and where is my shadow?

Judson Kaique - 20-07-2026

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  • theointhebackrow

    this one hits different when you're up alone at 3am

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  • gwen64

    does wandering through the nights at some point stop being lonely?

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  • benfromnights

    the vodka-at-the-empty-bar thing is real somehow

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    when you say no judges, do you mean no one's looking or that you don't care if they are?

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  • samReads2

    "blind under the dawn" is such a good title for that specific feeling of being awake but not seeing anything

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  • MelanieOdum

    what i recognise is that searching for your shadow instead of your self. like you know there's a darker version and that's the one you need to find.

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    the panther image stays with me

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  • NikhilRaman

    the abandoned city thing - is it that the city is actually empty or that you're too far inside your own head to see people?

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