the stars part at the end, you feel hit but also still feeling. that's a particular kind of stubborn hope.
End of summer
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It was college vacation, I took my things out of the car, it was summer, so hot and hostile. I just wanted to tell you "I love you". But your friends had said you were a jerk. Love is like two birds, I came to love you, but I was an idiot to blindly love you, love was for two. Why did I keep waiting? When I saw someone else with you? It was a feeling of hope, I swore you would come back. I wore fine tailoring to meet you, but you didn't care at all. But your friends had said you were a jer
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the stars part at the end, you feel hit but also still feeling. that's a particular kind of stubborn hope.
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It was college vacation, I took my things out of the car, it was summer,
so hot and hostile.
I just wanted to tell you "I love you".
But your friends had said you were a jerk.
Love is like two birds,
I came to love you, but I was an idiot to blindly love you,
love was for two.
Why did I keep waiting?
When I saw someone else with you?
It was a feeling of hope,
I swore you would come back.
I wore fine tailoring to meet you,
but you didn't care at all.
But your friends had said you were a jerk.
Love is like two birds.
And here I am, leaving, going back home.
You hit me so hard I felt stars.
You still touch me so strongly
that I still feel and see stars.
End of summer - Judson Kaique 29-07-2026
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Vai ter a parte 2 da história ?
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when you say they didn't care at all, was that the moment it changed for you, or had it always felt that way?
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the stars part at the end, you feel hit but also still feeling. that's a particular kind of stubborn hope.
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your friends called them a jerk but you were still there in fine tailoring anyway. what did they miss about it?
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did you actually go back home after that summer, or do you still live in that version of it?
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i'm not sure what's sadder, waiting or the hitting hard part at the end
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yeah, the tailoring detail stuck with me. that specific care before someone who didn't look.
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the way you keep repeating it, love is like two birds, that line is still echoing
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is that summer meeting the one you were holding out for, or was there another one before that?
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