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Hana_Sato88

The way you're telling this feels like you're leading us into something bigger. Starting over is never just about one person.

The way you're telling this feels like you're leading us into something bigger. Starting over is never just about one person.

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I never imagined that simply moving in with my mother would change my life so much...

Starting over from scratch was one of my biggest fears—until I got here. A new life and new friendships. At first, everything was normal, right up until the day I landed a job as a waitress; the place wasn't far from my house, which worked out perfectly for me.

As the days went by, a coworker told me about a guy. Like anything else, I didn't pay much attention—or at least that’s the impression I gave—but who would have guessed I was actually intrigued to find out who he was and what he was like?...

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  • afrog

    Glll

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  • Hana_Sato88

    The way you're telling this feels like you're leading us into something bigger. Starting over is never just about one person.

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    Does the coworker still tell you things, or did something change after you started noticing?

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  • DeniseHollo

    tell us about the guy đź‘€

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  • nodding_along

    I wanted to know what happens next. That's a good hook.

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  • benfromnights

    Are you still at that restaurant or did something else happen?

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    Moving back is scary and you owned it anyway. That matters.

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  • maybe_im_wrong

    The whole 'pretending I wasn't paying attention but actually super intrigued' move is so relatable. We've all done that.

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  • just_curious_tho

    When you moved in with your mom, did you think that was going to be a fresh start or did it feel forced at the time?

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  • mar_

    Me AvĂ­a Rendido.

    Hace un año perdí un libro que escribí y desde ahí no quise escribir más. Hoy gracias a Dios me dio el valor de intentarlo otra vez y estoy muy feliz de que personas que no conozco le gustara lo que escribí.🫶❤️‍🩹

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