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CHAPTER 2: Motivated by risk

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Now that I knew his name, I just wanted to find him at the shop to see who he was. I got home, said hello to my mom, and we chatted for a bit. Then my brother and sister-in-law arrived; I greeted…

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Now that I knew his name, I just wanted to find him at the shop to see who he was. I got home, said hello to my mom, and we chatted for a bit. Then my brother and sister-in-law arrived; I greeted them, went to my room to shower, and later came back down to have dinner and talk with them.

That’s when my brother said to me:

—Hey, you need to know there are people you shouldn't associate with, okay?

—Why?I asked.

—There are members of organized gangs around here—you know, gangsters.

—Oh, okay, I get it. I'll be careful.

— don't want to see you getting involved with those people. I have friends who’ve told me about them; their names are Nico, Dan, and Ale. They’re the ones who live in this area.

I was stunned, because I didn't know if it was the same Ale I’d wanted to meet. All I said was, "Okay, got it," then I went to my room, put on some music, and lay down to think about everything he’d told me. And the funny thing is, instead of being scared, I felt even more motivated!

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  • afrog

    Is it living for the risk, or u think the people r misunderstood??

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  • theointhebackrow

    wait but did you actually find him or nah? can't leave it there 😭

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  • samReads2

    why did you need to put on music before thinking about it? like what song?

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    the shop, his name, the warning, your choice. those four stay with me.

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  • gwen64

    the fact that you felt more motivated instead of scared - that says something about you.

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  • benfromnights

    did you go back to the shop after your brother told you? i need to know what you did.

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    okay so what actually happened next? did you find him at the shop?

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  • NikhilRaman

    do you know for sure if it's the same ale? like did you have any way to check?

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  • MelanieOdum

    why do you feel more motivated when people say don't? is it the person or the risk?

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