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I never imagined that simply moving in with my mother would change my life so much...

Starting over from scratch was one of my biggest fears—until I got here. A new life and new friendships. At first, everything was normal, right up until the day I landed a job as a waitress; the place wasn't far from my house, which worked out perfectly for me.

As the days went by, a coworker told me about a guy. Like anything else, I didn't pay much attention—or at least that’s the impression I gave—but who would have guessed I was actually intrigued to find out who he was and what he was like?...

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  • afrog

    Glll

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  • Hana_Sato88

    The way you're telling this feels like you're leading us into something bigger. Starting over is never just about one person.

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    Does the coworker still tell you things, or did something change after you started noticing?

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  • DeniseHollo

    tell us about the guy đź‘€

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  • nodding_along

    I wanted to know what happens next. That's a good hook.

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  • benfromnights

    Are you still at that restaurant or did something else happen?

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    Moving back is scary and you owned it anyway. That matters.

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  • maybe_im_wrong

    The whole 'pretending I wasn't paying attention but actually super intrigued' move is so relatable. We've all done that.

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  • just_curious_tho

    When you moved in with your mom, did you think that was going to be a fresh start or did it feel forced at the time?

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  • mar_

    Me AvĂ­a Rendido.

    Hace un año perdí un libro que escribí y desde ahí no quise escribir más. Hoy gracias a Dios me dio el valor de intentarlo otra vez y estoy muy feliz de que personas que no conozco le gustara lo que escribí.🫶❤️‍🩹

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