Is that song part real? The 'in another life' bit - it felt like something you've carried around.
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𝘊𝘩𝘱3- 𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘌𝘭𝘦𝘨𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘙𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘯𝘨𝘦......
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Is that song part real? The 'in another life' bit - it felt like something you've carried around.
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𝘊𝘩𝘱3- 𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘌𝘭𝘦𝘨𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘙𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘯𝘨𝘦......
"𝘐 𝘣𝘶𝘳𝘴𝘵 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘰𝘰𝘳 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘮𝘺 𝘣𝘦𝘢𝘶𝘵𝘪𝘧𝘶𝘭 𝘴𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘥 𝘪𝘯 𝘮𝘺 𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘥𝘴 𝘮𝘢𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘯 𝘢𝘯𝘯𝘰𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘴𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘦𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘴𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥. 𝘈𝘴 𝘐 𝘣𝘶𝘳𝘴𝘵 𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘪𝘥𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘥𝘰𝘰𝘳 𝘮𝘺 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘴𝘪𝘯𝘴 𝘴𝘤𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘮𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘴 𝘐 𝘭𝘰𝘰𝘬 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘮 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘮𝘺 𝘥𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘭𝘺 𝘦𝘺𝘦𝘴. 𝘐 𝘵𝘪𝘥𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘮 𝘶𝘱 𝘴𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘸𝘰𝘯'𝘵 𝘣𝘦 𝘢𝘣𝘭𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘥𝘰 𝘢𝘯𝘺𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨."
"𝘠𝘰𝘶'𝘳𝘦 𝘴𝘶𝘤𝘩 𝘢 𝘤𝘢𝘭𝘰𝘶𝘴 𝘱𝘦𝘳𝘴𝘰𝘯." Her cousins yelled.
"What about you huh. You killed my family, my friends, everyone!!!!! You are only calous person!!! " She yelled with anger and sorrow.
She killed her cousins and sat on her thorn. She cried as she was getting crowned with her memories.
Later she went to visit everyone's grave yard and at last she went to her lover's grave yard tears in her eyes.
.•♫•♬•In another life, I would be your girl...We'd keep our promises, be us against the world....•♬•♫•.•♬•♫•.
.•♫•♬•In another life. I would make you stay. So i don't have to say the one that got away...•♫•♬•.•♬•♫•.•♬•♫•.
A century later....
It was years ago, but I still have my memories of the graceful women. It's my rebirth I this world and this time I will find him.
Marcher was in a museum when suddenly she bumped into someone. When she looked back it was him....
Later they started dating, then married and now have a happy family. Even if they didn't spend time together that time, but now they are living happily forever.
Final chapter has ended
Thank you for your support.
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The reincarnation bit pulled me in - I'm curious how much more world-building there is under this, or if it's mainly about them reuniting.
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When they bump into each other in the museum - did she know right away it was him, or did it take a second?
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When she gets reborn, does she actually remember who she was before, or is it something she just knows without remembering?
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The graveyard part - that grief coming back alone. I recognised that feeling, and I needed to read it.
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Is this really the final chapter or are you going to keep the story going? Please say you're writing more.
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Wait, when she tied her cousins up - were they supposed to do something after that, or was that the end for them?
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The graveyard part - that image of her alone with all those graves. Did you write that from something you'd actually been through?
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Is that song part real? The 'in another life' bit - it felt like something you've carried around.
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Lovely :-)😊