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The Life of a Diet Coke

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Sitting on a shelf with thousands the same

In groups

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Sitting on a shelf with thousands the same

Wondering what other shelves look like

The little coke can merely blinked an eye

When a shadow stopped by and a hand came

So many to pick from with no difference

Sitting back with a little self pitied sigh

Little coke can just squinched little eyes

Being lifted up with nothing making sense

Too much excitement in the rocking cart

Jiggling a little in unexpected unknown

Poor little thing simply wished for best

Opening up to all possibilities and a new start

Long ride in the dark square box of the car

Wondering how many more miles to go

The simple minded coke couldn’t count

Wished for the best of all to the spinning star

Bright sunshine peeking through the box

Waking up with woozy dream to complete

The squashed coke just squinted ...

Being lifted up again and set down on a rock

Heated rock against its little cold body

Seeking for the intention of the large man

The destination seems near but not clear

Dreaded in vain and wailed in uncertainty

Warmed up in heated bubbles and acidity

Moaning for cooling air of the shelves

The buzzing sound of lifted cap stroke

Relieved in sigh of life away in certainty

Clock ticked seemingly without end

Puzzled with indecisive course of action

Sweaty little coke can rolled eyes around

Indeed seeing a shadow of enormous kind

Anxiety kicked off in hopeless and despair

Wanting to know exactly the next thing

The enormous shadow moved around

Dreaded little coke was lifted up in the air

Two shinny fixated eyes made it choke

Wondering what could be so fascinating

There came an exhilarating exclaim

‘’Aspartame, that’s what makes a DIET coke!’

Shivers waved through and out, with a deep sigh

Questioning what could be worse

‘Of course Aspartame,

could have been a smarter one to say bye’

Sweats, tears dripping and smeared with stain

Feeling light headed while getting empty

A strange question suddenly came to mind

Would an empty coke, diet or not,

be still a coke or just a can?

Thoughts

  • samReads2

    why the enormous shadow and not just say a person? like, was that the point, that the can sees this huge scary thing?

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    the jiggling in the cart, the not knowing, the fear. that feeling is staying with me

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  • gwen64

    i copied down the part where the little coke squinches its eyes and understands nothing and i need to keep it

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  • benfromnights

    when the can learns it's made of aspartame, was it better off not knowing?

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    this little can is making me worried about things and the story isn't even done 😅

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  • NikhilRaman

    at the end when it asks if an empty can is still a coke, do you think it already knew the answer?

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  • MelanieOdum

    the way you gave that can its own worries about what it means to exist, i recognised that in people. one of millions, still scared of being nothing.

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  • theointhebackrow

    getting picked out of thousands of identical cans to have your whole day change at random... yeah, that feels right

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