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I shall be the lover

sylvie101
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I hope to keep you as my favorite torment, Although the asters know my heart will surely lament, This lugubrious crucifixion will be my cherished amend Even if it determines my end.

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The lover

Aureate brown eyes engulf me as your lover,

I can't seem to get my heart out of this bleak cover

My dim love is singing in an ariose melody

While your infatuation isn't a remedy,

I hope to keep you as my favorite torment,

Although the asters know my heart will surely lament,

This lugubrious crucifixion will be my cherished amend

Even if it determines my end,

The moon will keep on shining and calming the lonesome night

The sun will keep on loving those misty clouds without any fright

Everything will be calm and get tougher

And I will keep on being the lover.




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  • NikhilRaman

    is the person you're writing about aware that you've decided to be the lover no matter what?

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  • benfromnights

    accepting someone as your favorite torment, that's dark in a way i didn't expect from the start

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    when you say your dim love is singing, is it still singing or is that past tense?

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  • samReads2

    lover/cover/tougher repeating over and over is hypnotic 🌙

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  • athonite_lurker

    there's something very Eastern Orthodox about accepting the pain as part of what you're choosing

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  • BereanBrandon

    the way you use crucifixion as something chosen, not something done to you, where does that come from?

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