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Sounds are all gone

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Sounds are all gone

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Sounds are all gone

Trees, trees, you whisper to me,

With your sweet hushes,

calling to me.

The wind lets you speak,

in dulcet sounds, trees softly sing with their crunchy leaves

They remind me of your voice,

your Aryan eye.

All the parts of you

that woo'd me

soothed me,

But our kismet has long been forgotten

Fall is now gone,

These sounds make me wonder,

of what once was, once was,

But shall never be

To be in your arms,

to be held, be loved,

to never be forgotten,

to be yours, and let all time stop

But fall is now gone,

It's now all quiet here.


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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    this feels like missing someone you still think about even after a long time

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  • NikhilRaman

    did this actually happen to you or is it something you imagined completely?

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  • gwen64

    this one's going in my notebook. i'll probably reread it in the winter

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  • benfromnights

    the mood in this is so still and sad 🍂

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    What made you write about autumn and trees specifically?

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  • samReads2

    Is the poem about a specific person or is it about how loss feels in general?

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