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Amorist's life

sylvie101
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When we saw the stars waltzing out in the night sky When we were young, and you were mine, Your face softly fades from the grip of my memories Last time I saw you, the asters were susurrating your leave For the last time, for the final time.

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Amorist's life

Wish I could live the aureate moment, 

When we didn't feel the pressure of time, 

When I could feel every unrivalled moment, 

When we saw the stars waltzing out in the night sky

When we were young, and you were mine, 

Your face softly fades from the grip of my memories

 Last time I saw you, the asters were susurrating your leave

 For the last time, for the final time,

 Your frivolous self, standing in that meager hall,

 O had I known it was our last sweet autumn fall! 

(Wish I could stop living in an amorist's fall)


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  • Hana_Sato88

    yeah. the feeling of time running out while they're still standing there. that's the whole ache.

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  • RayDelacruz

    "the last sweet autumn fall", you're still there. nothing about this is past tense really.

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    did you ever tell them they were your aureate moment, or did you only realize it after they were gone?

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  • Priyanka_R

    i think you already know you can't stop living in that autumn fall. the poem proves it.

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  • benfromnights

    the asters susurrating your leave. that image stays exactly as you described it, leaves no room to forget.

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  • samReads2

    when you say their face softly fades, is that something that happened over time, or something you did on purpose?

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