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BETWEEN US A Short Story - Part Two Rehan Azam

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gwen64

So the mark on Elara's wrist at the end - is that the Flame choosing her the way Corvin said it did, or is this something else entirely?

So the mark on Elara's wrist at the end - is that the Flame choosing her the way Corvin said it did, or is this something else entirely?

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Between us: Holding on

by Rehan Azam

CHAPTER 1 THE STRANGER ON THE PLATFORM

The train doors were still closing when Kai stepped out of a rift of gold light onto the very platform where the shadows had pooled minutes before, too late for the moment he had come to stop and exactly in time for the one that mattered more. Elara was three cars down, pressed against the glass of a departing train, and the man with violet eyes was watching her go with the unbothered patience of someone who has never once needed to hurry.

"You found her before I did," the man said, without turning. "I am almost impressed."

"Corvin." Kai's voice was low, and something in his chest, some old inherited grief that was not entirely his own, recognized the name the way you recognize a scar you did not give yourself.

"So you know my name now, at least." Corvin turned, unhurried, hands loose at his sides, nothing about his posture suggesting a man expecting to fight. "Your master never did like finishing a story he did not start."

A departure announcement crackled overhead, some ordinary line about a delay two platforms over, and for a moment neither of them spoke, both waiting out the tinny, indifferent voice as though it might have something more important to say than either of them did.

"Sit with me," Corvin said, once it had passed. "She is on a train, not a ledge. You have longer than you think."

"I am not sitting anywhere with you."

"Then stand." Corvin shrugged, unbothered, and glanced toward the bench a few feet away, an old, ordinary thing bolted to an ordinary platform, absurd against the size of what stood beside it. "I only want five minutes of honesty. Ask me why I want your name badly enough to corner a girl who has nothing to do with any of it, and I will tell you properly."

Kai did not move, but he did not raise his hand either. "Fine. Why."

"Because your bloodline gets to decide, generation after generation, who is worthy of carrying something enormous, and it has never once asked itself whether it deserves that right." Corvin's voice did not rise. If anything it grew quieter. "I loved a keeper of the Flame once. Before the title meant anything to either of us. Back when she was only a woman who laughed too loudly at her own jokes."

A second train rattled through the far platform without stopping, loud enough that Corvin paused mid-thought and let it pass, his eyes tracking it the way a much older, much more patient man tracks something that will still be there in a hundred years whether he watches it or not.

"When the Flame chose her," he continued once the noise had cleared, "it did not ask if she wanted to be chosen. And when it looked at me, standing beside her, it did not bother to answer at all. I was not the kind of vessel it wasted its attention on."

"That is not the same as what you are doing to her." Kai nodded toward the departing train, his voice sharper than he meant it.

"No." Corvin considered that, unhurried, as though weighing the fairness of the comparison out loud. "It is worse. And better. Depending on which of us you ask." He tilted his head slightly. "I am not going to hurt Elara. I never intended to. I wanted you here, listening, and I have found, over the centuries, that people only truly listen when something they love is on a train pulling out of a station."

"That is a horrible way to start a conversation."

"It is the only way anyone has ever agreed to have one with me." Corvin allowed himself something close to a smile, thin and self-aware. "I am tired of being the villain in a story no one bothers to finish reading."

Kai's jaw worked. He wanted, badly, to have an answer ready for that, and did not.

"You think I want to burn down your Sanctum out of spite." Corvin studied him for a moment before going on, letting the silence sit there uncomfortably rather than filling it. "I do not. I think whatever your bloodline has spent centuries keeping shut was never a monster. Only an exile. The same as me."

"Convenient, that the two of you have so much in common."

That landed. Corvin's mouth twitched, not quite a smile, not quite offense. "Fair," he admitted. "But tell me honestly. In three hundred years, has your bloodline ever once been wrong about anyone it shut out?"

"I don't know." Kai's voice was quieter now. "I only found out I was part of it a few hours ago."

"Then we have that much in common too." Something almost gentle crossed Corvin's face, gone as quickly as it came. "I am not asking you to agree with me. I am asking you to consider that we were both handed the same fire from opposite sides of a closed door, and only one of us was ever taught how to hold it without being burned."

"And Elara is what," Kai said. "A bargaining chip in an argument that started before either of us was born?"

"Elara," Corvin said, and for the first time something sharpened behind his eyes, "is the reason this conversation matters to you more than anything your master could have told you in that mountain of his."

He let that sit a moment, unhurried, watching the platform lights flicker against the departing train's tail end far down the tunnel.

"I am not interested in hurting her," he added, quieter now. "I am interested in you understanding what it costs to love someone the world has decided you are not allowed to keep. I have had three hundred years to learn that lesson. I would rather you learn it from me, in words, than the way I learned it."

For a moment neither of them spoke, the platform's ordinary hum filling the space where a fight should have been, commuters and announcements and a departing train utterly indifferent to the weight of what was being said beside them.

"Maybe you are right," Kai said finally, low, reluctant, hating a little how true it felt to say it out loud. "Maybe the Flame never asked the right questions about who it let in and who it shut out."

"Thank you."

"That does not make it right to use her to prove it."

"No." Corvin's agreement came easier this time, almost sad. "It does not. I never said I was doing this the right way. I said I was doing it the only way anyone has ever listened." He stepped back toward the shadowed edge of the platform, unhurried even now. "Find her. Ask her yourself what she wants, instead of assuming the danger is mine to solve and hers to survive."

"And after that?"

"After that," Corvin said, already half a shadow himself, "come find me. I think we have more to finish than either of us expected."

He stepped backward into a shadow that had no business existing under station lighting, and was gone, leaving behind no threat, no ultimatum, only the uncomfortable, lingering shape of an argument Kai could not immediately dismiss.

Kai turned toward the train pulling away down the line, Elara's face still visible for one more second through the glass, her eyes finding his through the crowd exactly as the doors sealed shut between them. He did not know her last name. He did not have her number. But he knew, with a certainty that had nothing to do with magic and everything to do with the ordinary, stubborn shape of the heart, that he was not going to let a three-hundred-year-old argument decide what happened between the two of them.

He ran after the train, and the light in his hand burned brighter with every step.

CHAPTER 2: WHAT SHE DESERVES TO KNOW

He did not catch the train. He was never going to catch it on foot, not through a crowd that had no idea it was standing between him and the only thing he actually cared about saving tonight. But Aldric’s lessons, drilled into him over two years of scorched courtyards, had taught him one absolute truth: a rift did not care about track schedules.

He turned down the first empty stairwell, pressed his palm flat against the cold tile, and let the light do what running never could. The world folded once-a held breath, a doorway-and when it opened again, he was standing on the platform of the next station down the line, three minutes ahead of a train that didn't know yet it had lost the race.

When the doors finally slid open, she was one of the last ones off, moving fast, checking behind her the way people do when they are still running from a ghost.

She saw him before he could speak. For one full second, neither of them moved. The station noise faded, the hum of the overhead lights blurring into the background as the reality of her being right there, safe and breathing, settled over him.

"You're here," she breathed.

"I'm here."

He crossed the distance and pulled her into him. He didn't ask permission, just wrapped one hand at the back of her head and pressed his palm flat against her spine, holding her tight enough to anchor them both against the night. She let him, her fists closing in the fabric of his jacket, her shoulders finally dropping as the panic bled out of her.

They didn't speak for a long time. They just stood there on the emptying platform, letting the quiet space between them absorb the chaos of the last hour.

Eventually, they moved to a bench near the far end, where the shadows stretched long and the crowd thinned to nothing. He kept hold of her hand, his thumb resting against her knuckles, feeling the steady, real beat of her pulse.

"There was a man," she said softly, staring out at the dark tracks. "He knew things. He knew your name."

"His name is Corvin," Kai replied, his voice low against the hum of the rails. He looked down at their joined hands, struggling for a moment to find the right way to frame it. "My family carries something called the Golden Flame. It chooses its vessels without asking permission. Three hundred years ago, it rejected Corvin and took the woman he loved instead. He's spent centuries hating the fire, and hating the bloodline that guards it."

Elara turned his words over, her expression thoughtful rather than frightened. "And he thinks you're just like them?"

"He thinks we're all cut from the same cloth-that we decide who is worthy and who gets left out in the cold." Kai sighed, rubbing the back of his neck. "The terrifying part is that he isn't entirely wrong about the anger. I just... I hate how he used you to prove it."

"So do I," she said, her voice dry. "I'm not particularly fond of being a philosophical argument for a three-hundred-year-old immortal."

A faint, tired smile touched the corners of Kai's mouth. "Fair."

"Is that why you kept trying to push me away?" she asked, turning her head to look directly at him, her eyes steady in the half-light. "Because you thought it was safer?"

"Partly. Mostly because I'm used to handling the heavy things alone, and I'm terrible at realizing when someone actually wants to share the weight." He held her gaze, refusing to look away. "I'm sorry, Elara."

She was quiet for a moment, the tension finally draining completely from her posture. Slowly, she turned her hand over, lacing her fingers properly through his. No magic, no theatrics-just an ordinary, stubborn gesture of trust.

"Good," she murmured. "Because I'm not going anywhere."

She reached into her pocket, pulled out his phone, and tapped her name and number into the screen without hesitation. When she handed it back, the glowing blue display showed the missed call from the unknown number, but neither of them gave it a second glance.

They sat like that for a while longer, letting the quiet settle around them like a shield, far away from mountains, flames, and men with violet eyes. It was only after the stillness had stretched into something comfortable that the spell was broken.

"Elara!"

A voice cut sharply across the platform-a young man jogging toward them out of breath, keys dangling from his fingers as if he’d abandoned his car mid-turn. He slowed only when he saw her sitting there, whole and unharmed, though his eyes darted immediately to Kai with an unmistakable edge of protective hostility.

"Your sister called me," Theo said, ignoring Kai entirely at first as he stopped in front of her. "She said you got on a train and sounded terrified. I've been checking every station on this line for twenty minutes."

"Theo, I'm fine. Really," Elara said, standing up and offering a reassuring nod.

Theo looked her over one more time, making sure, before his gaze finally snapped back to Kai. "And you must be the one from the train. The one who vanishes for a week at a time."

"That's him," Elara answered for him, stepping slightly closer to Kai's side, her hand still linked with his. "I'll explain everything tomorrow, Theo. I promise."

Theo's jaw tightened. He looked at their joined hands, then back to Kai's face, measuring him with the quiet, stubborn assessment of a man who had spent years being the one who showed up.

"Take care of her," Theo said finally, his voice hard around the edges. "That's not a request."

"I intend to," Kai replied evenly.

With a final, lingering look at Elara, Theo turned and headed back toward the stairs, leaving them alone once more beneath the flickering platform lights.

{Author's Note: A line was sacrificed here. It knew too much ,Not gonna tell You all}

"He worries," she said simply, stepping back into Kai's space and looking up at him with a quiet challenge in her eyes. "Now. You have a mountain to go back to, and a stranger to find. And I am coming with you."

Kai looked at her-really looked at her-and realized there was no point in arguing. The fight had gone out of him, replaced by something much stronger.

"Fine," he whispered, tightening his grip on her hand. "Just stay close."

"Obviously," she said.

They walked away hand in hand.

Neither of them noticed the faint golden mark appearing on Elara's wrist.

By the time the station lights flickered back to life...

it had already disappeared.

END

Be Continued... (If Rehan ever finds the motivation to open a blank document instead of taking another nap of 6hrs.)

© Rehan Azam,'Between us :Holding on' An Short story by Rehan Azam , All Rights Reserved.

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  • NikhilRaman

    Corvin being tired of being the villain in a story nobody finishes - that line is going to sit with me

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  • MelanieOdum

    When Kai realized he wasn't going to let centuries of magic decide things for him - what made that shift happen for him in that moment?

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  • theointhebackrow

    Poor Theo showing up to save the day only to find out he's way too late and the supernatural love interest already has this handled

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  • samReads2

    That part where he just held her while they didn't say anything - yeah, that's the detail I'm gonna remember from this

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    I'm kind of on Corvin's side about how messed up it is to decide someone's worth without asking them first, even if his method was terrible

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  • gwen64

    So the mark on Elara's wrist at the end - is that the Flame choosing her the way Corvin said it did, or is this something else entirely?

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  • benfromnights

    Kai running after a train he could never catch on foot is maybe the most real thing in this whole magical setup

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    When Elara just takes his hand without explanation - was that planned, or did she surprise you by trusting him so quickly?

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