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The Rust Worker

JoaoConstantine
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The Rust Worker

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The Rust Worker

I enter the factory before the sun remembers to rise,

and leave my heart outside the gates.

In here, no one asks who I used to be —

only how many hours I can still endure.

My hands produce rust,

nameless parts, machines without memory.

Everything I touch grows old,

perhaps because my hands learnt how from me.

I am a heartless worker,

a number lost among bolts and smoke,

a man trading his own soul

for a few notes at the end of the month.

The metal screams.

The machines breathe.

I remain silent.

I make things that will continue existing

long after I am gone,

whilst every fragment of who I was

is slowly consumed by the shift.

I have no life left to give the factory,

only whatever remains of it.

And still, I return every day.

Perhaps work is my last form of prayer.

Perhaps every finished piece

is a small attempt at redemption.

I do not want to be rich.

I do not want to be remembered.

I only want, one day,

to look at my hands covered in rust

and discover that something human still remains in them.

Because some men work to live.

I work

to discover whether I am still alive.

Thoughts

  • samReads2

    The metal screams, the machines breathe, I stay silent - that trio is enough. A whole life compressed into the moment of standing still in a room full of noise.

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  • gwen64

    The line about your hands teaching you how to age, I keep coming back to that. It's not despair exactly, it's something stranger and truer than that.

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  • benfromnights

    The returning every day despite everything, that's where the real thing is. Not the poetry, just the fact of it.

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  • PaulaOkonkwo

    What's the smallest thing that still feels human to you, even after the shift's over? Is there some moment where you feel like yourself again?

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  • NikhilRaman

    When you ask if something human remains in your rust-covered hands, is that something you've actually found, or are you still searching?

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  • MelanieOdum

    I recognised this. Twenty years listening to people talk about the jobs they give everything to, and this is exactly the prayer I've heard from them.

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  • theointhebackrow

    But you return every day. After all that, what's the thing that gets you back to the factory? Is it the work itself or something else entirely?

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  • samReads2

    the metal screams / the machines breathe / i remain silent. there's something about that trio that just stops everything

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  • readsOnTheTrain

    The part about leaving your heart outside the gates: is that something you actually do before each shift, or did you figure that out writing this?

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